Wow. I like how you took something similar and twisted it. Very nicely done. What would've added just more flare, is if you rhymed within each line.

5/5.

Great job, I wouldn't have thought you were going through writer's block.

I love how you used the 'Violets are blue and roses are red' thing, I have never thought of it the other way!!! Great Poem!!!!!!!
5/5
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WOW IS REALLY ALL I CAN SAY IT WAS A VERY SAD POEM AND I WAS THERE IN EVERY LONE AND STANZA AND EVERY MOMENT I WAS THERE FEELING THIS POEM EVERY WORD. I LOVE IT

Wow, that was fantastic! I'm in love with it! Favourited! xxx

You say you have writers block...i say this poem is simply perfect...when poets write a 2 page poem they tend to lose most readers...you managed beautifuly to convey feelings in few lines....thank you for sharing ...enjoyable read....5/5 please vote and comment on my latest "gifts of sorrow" "arabian sands" "crown of thorns""my tears" thank you

I love the images and metaphors in this. I also like how it can be interpreted in different ways, meanings. It may be short and seemingly simple but there is an underlaying deepness that really sinks into one's heart and mind. Excellent use of language and flawless rhyme sceme. A very touching and sadly beautiful poem.

Peace,

Grey Ajurahck

This is magnificent. It is so melancholy and beautiful. I like how it can be interpreted in different ways. Love the unusual wording. You have painted a wonderful picture with your words, a very meaningful and touching poem.

Peace, Poetry & Power,

Gary Jurechka

What do you do with the faded petals
what do you do with old
what do you when you lost your
shine
what

I really liked this one, it wasl ike I could see the flowers from your words. Magnificent. -T. Jane

I LOVE IT!! ABSOLUTLY WONDERFUL! KEEP WRITING

For witers block it sure is a good poem. i loved it. and there deffinitly is alot of interpretting in it good work

Such sweetness and flow! 5/5

Lovely love lovely poem.
I could totally see what you mean.
Beautiful job on this one.

<3

It has deep philosophical meaning, a really well penned and meaningful poem.With writers block you writing wonders :)

Take care
chavii.

O_O oh wow! It's very deep :| I love your choice of words! Even though you have a writer's block you can still create a masterpiece.. Fantastic work. You're truelly talented.

I love this one Gem, it like to can see it happening in slow motion...

It is really a sweet sad poem.
So touching... deep...!!!5/5
I've straight away added it to my favourite
list!!!

I cant see them flowers changing but.,... the fact we loose our personalities as we get real old and moldie :P GReat job Gemma
Peace
Anthony

Beautiful poem.
Very sad.

" They wither and fall, drifting to the floor
The beautiful colours are now nevermore
Floating to the ground in a pile so neat
The signal the end of a life pure and sweet "

This stanza was my favourite.
Beautiful written.
Love your work.
Take care

Wow great poem 5/5