I hope my ex will realize that I really love her.. Anyway this was again another well penned poem, good job. Flow was smooth, keep up the good work!

What a great story here. It's sad but, so true in away. After so much loved lost and so many lies, it's hard to trust and love again. Although, I think at some point you will "win" the love you yearn for and deserve. As it's been said so many times before, "It's better to have loved and lost, then to have never have loved before. Even though it might not always seem that way. Wonderful read, great concept. 5/5

marcella