ME OR HER?
by KIMMY Jul 2, 2007
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The music plays and i think of you!!!!are you thinking of me?? it plays faster!! like the way my heart beats when i see you!!!! the tears run down my face!!! i cry to know that i can't see you!!!! but i know that you still love me!!! the music slows down and so does my heart!!! the music speeds up again!! but my heart does not!!! why is that??? don't i love you!!! i know that i love you but there is something holding me back!!!! is it her? is it the girl the you hurt me with??? the music is going faster and faster and faster!!! and my heart is beating with intensity!!! i am full with rage when i think of ya'll together!!!! choose..... ME OR HER???? |
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17 years ago
by Jaime
^Agreed. You can find better.
As for the poem: It hardly even seemed like a poem. I think it would be easier to read if you laid it out nice, rather than in a paragraph form.
It's a good idea. I'm sure you can work with it to turn it into a great poem.
