Comments : Water of Waves

  • 17 years ago

    by Jaded Serenity

    Back to the shore over and over again
    I can't help but to think how it feels,
    To finally reach the sand and get swept off back to the water of waves***

    love this line, very metaphorical

    Maybe its because they want to feel free,
    Or maybe thats the way they want to be***

    My favorite line, i relate this one to life,
    i loved this poem, keep writting