Loved its , rhythm : ) 4/5 at least , would say 4.5 out of 5 but alas cannot vote in halfs,

very powerful and visual , not so sure about ending but will stick it in my favs and digest is some more

It was good, flowed pretty nice too. i liked it, good write.

These people need to learn to criticize.

Well before your praise, to the criticism,

Don't feel bad cuz' I seen this in many poet's. You must work on your grammar, and punctuation. Put capital letters where you need them.

I can urge this enough, it may not seem that much but it will make a difference from a 4 to a 5. It will look more mature, clean, neater, and professionally done, really it will.

So I URGE you, click the 'Spell Check' button before writing submit, and/or check it yourself carefully.

For the praise! [Every poets favorite part]
It has good flow, the words do not under any circumstances seem forced. It's tragic, desolate, and it's filled with emotion.

Its a darn 'good' poem I tell ya. 'Good' job.

[Voted 4]

_Sam

I liked it. It had good flow and emotion.

5/5 very strong, nicely written