Wow i really liked this one keep it up its so sad but its how most people treat others they dont you for you they see you for what you have done
_forever carly_

...Wow...that has some excellent imagery and really nice way with words. Love the first line. It really captures attention and the rest delivers maintaining that attention. Cool write. Has a dark undercurrent as well as a sad one. Short yet powerful. And the imagery is effective...kinda like quick glimpses of the whole picture.
~Faith-less

I like this poem a lot,It's amazing.Congratulations,you have done a great work.Take good care of you.Best regards,Michelle XxX