Pretty sad :(.. but i love it :)

Actually, i really like this poem.. keep coming back to it haha.. i love it :).. fantastic.. my favorite :D..
-Tylor

A four! I really like the imagery in it. Minor mistakes but nothing huge. My favorite line is i miss everything about you
your laugh your smile
i even miss your numbers i use to dial
That rhyme is a good one. Now we all know it's hard to stay away from rhyming true and you because it's been used so many times it's almost corny but I do that too. Now if you have a bunch of other good rhymes to back it up you can get away with anything. Try to read others poetry and see their style and experiment with it. You could do really well. Good luck!

Lovely.
i really enjoyed it, keep up the good work.

Its not a great "poem" but i love it x