Wow that was good a little iffy transition 4.5 loved the write |
by nikki
Thie piece was well thought of, i thought it was beautifully written and you expressed the emotion in your words perfectly. 5/5 |
Another great piece. I find it to be very unique as to what others have mentioned. |
by tears i cry
It was good but there was to much rhyming and tht doesnt really work in this poetry technique 4/5 for a good poem but to many rhymes |
by NearlyCrazy6
Aww! so sweet. I love this poem. I think it was very cute and beautiful. 5/5 |
by Miu
Beautiful. Could feel your emotions clear, loving warm and cute and same time being scared. Touching. |
by halie
Wow i loved it |