Its short and sweet! i like it you have ur own style of writitng!

Those were great words 5/5

Thought it was reallly from the heart
i got a sense of real fear that u were going to lose something or maybe that u didn't want to lose anything,
great choice of words and the poem didn't need to be long, it was perfect in the length
it shows for me that poems about love dont need to be long and overwhelming
simplicity is what love in essence is all about

i love it 5/5