by BrokenREALiTy Jul 3, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Why do people regret so much, |
by Miranda
Very inspirational and true.Some parts,it seemed as if you wrote a sentance a certain way just to get it to rhyme,but oddly it didn't upset the flow of the poem.Great piece.A 5/5 from me. |
by Blissful
WOW. This is for sure going into my favorites. The emotions the imagery everything about it was mind blowing. The loved the last stanza, it was an amazing way to tie the poem intogether. I do think you kinda lost the flow in the second to last stanza but the ending was so intriguing that it didn't matter. Well done *5/5* |
by Kaila
Loved it! |
by Crystal Gaze
A very inspiring peice. |
by Brittany
I've also read this one before :P Seriously, I love your work. I never find your rhymes forced. You are brilliant. I think that this poem hits me deeply because I felt the same way about my ex. I wanted to hate him SO badly, but then just like the poem says...how could you? You shared so many moments and if you loved them, how could you not even want to remember that? I honestly think it's flawless. |