Wow,what a really honest poem.but its always good that way.beautifully done.
one of those poems that really makes a person think.
thanks again for commenting. =]

--lexie

Beautiful poem. You started and ended your poem well. :)
And the emotion on this poem is powerful.
And the rhythm between 2nd and 4th line in every stanza is a plus point... :)
Well done.

Okay...each of your poems are so well thought out and have such an inspirational message. That's what I enjoy about them! I enjoy poets who really think it through and pour it out! My fave lines are

"Who says you have to throw away the memories,
That you were clearly meant to keep?"

Great job! 5/5
Charisma*

Wow this is great.. you really make a good point with the questions you ask.. how simple things can just change someone and certain things they once believed it.. excellent job.. i really enjoyed it.. 5/5.. and thanks for the comment =]

Your poems make me think alot. i think this poem is sending people a message, like we all need to wake up to ourselves. once again this poem really made me think. i'm really liking what ive read of your work so far. =]
5/5
.x

Hmmm.. i dont really know what to say about this poem except it was just wonderful. couldnt have been done better
.x

Well done mindy....everyone should feel this way and learn from experiences...not carry bagage

That was nicely done, I really liked it, Your rhyming was flawless and didnt seem forced and it flowed perfectly,5/5

Great one, you asked very important questions in it. I like its flow and the wording is excellent.
Well done, good job, 5/5

Great job.i liked the flow and everything else about the poem.

Awesome poem, a strong feeling packed into a great poem. incredible.

your servant:
david

I cant exactly agree with your poem but i loved the voice i heard in this poem 5/5

Hey Mindy :)

This was a well penned poem, Flow was flawless, the word choice really fits the poem. Well done

How do you hate someone you once loved,
When you promised them forever?
^^ I really love those two lines.. It reminded me of someone..

5/5 as always!

That was a very strong and good poem

I love it !
i dont love many poems bbut i love this one
AMAZING writer !

Perfect... smooth. The meaning for me is correct, why wont people think of it that way... you have a great mind.
keep up the good work
this is a, not good.., it was great poem

cheers. ^^

Thankyou, what a positive and wonderful way to think,,, how right you are...

Hey, I liked this poem, really had feeling. It put me in a place of feeling. Also when I got on here I read your message on of about you. Honestly, I like it, lol, no joke. I thought it was and well you get to the point, you don't care what people think, and I feel the same way. Ight well later Message me back some. Name's Cody Cunningham or CJ. Ight well later

Very very good
i agree completly
nice work
5/5

WOW! what an incredibly insighful poem. I love this. makes us all think. you present a great view here that sadly not many of us see.
Though love may end in sorrow, if it brought you nothing but happiness while you were experiencing it, then why dread it?..
that is a great point. and i do agree with it very much.
i was especially amazed with this stanza:

Who's to say that all happiness is lost,
Just because someone hurt you deep?
Who says you have to throw away the memories,
That you were clearly meant to keep?

the part about the memories is so true. i hold my memories safe with me all the time and never hate the people who have hurt me.

the poem flowed well. the emotion behind it was deep. and it was generally well penned. a great write!
keep it up
--Viola