I love this poem :) very good writing....

ashleigh

Wow this peom is soo great, wow. I feel the emotion, this girl just waisted everything she had if you almost had her. Stupidity, I could feel your emotion in the poem. It's fantastic!!
I loved this part:
"well she looked like her
in the beginning she even acted like her
but then she changed
she still looked like her"

you did a great job keenan!!
keep it up

Its happens to us all, we think we are in love only to figure out we art not, tis a good poem, love the imagery of the girl of your dreams, i give it anothe 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

That is a beautiful poem! Sad, but very good.
5/5
.x

If u figure out way u like her it will help u alot
it seems like u like her cause of looks
but i hope its not that

please write back to me or comment on one of my poems or qoutes

You've written, yet again, a gorgeous love poem. Though it was short and fairly sketchy, it somehow delivered its bittersweet message quite well. Indeed, we usually put up unrealistic ideals; and the other person would try in vain to attain such exactness. In the end, there would be disappointment and heartbreak. Nice poem, nevertheless. Thanks for sharing. ~Marian