What I Believe

by DeathlyAmore   Jul 3, 2007


With love and passion; Truth.
With emotions and blissfully bliss.
I'll give you my heart; Ever So,
To wish; Pray, you take of this.

With trust and my emotions,
I come to you with all of me.
To perceive and hope, perhaps,
this could be... meant to be...

To believe utterly in what;
I feel is so, ever true.
To show and, prove my emotions,
are devoted... utterly, only to you...
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Plot and Thesis, Main Idea:
"To come to you,
and tell you what I believe:
My emotions for you are real,
and there only to you"
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To your consideration,
Samuel.

"I shall always and forever be her...."
[Deathly'Amore]

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  • 16 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    Cool...a different style of writing, I like that, keep up the gud work...^^

  • 16 years ago

    by Hollywood

    Great job...once agian...

  • 17 years ago

    by So Wrong its Right

    Excellent writing, but I didn't feel a lot of flow and rythym. Maybe it's just me. But it had nice depth.

  • 17 years ago

    by Arun Khan

    The idea is good, and the writing is fine.. but somewhere you didnt pull it off, try and play with the words abit more, dont be afraid of writing more.. dont get me wrong your a good writer and I liked it, but something is missing.. 3 / 5
    God bless
    Arun

  • 17 years ago

    by WiNgS Of StEeL

    U have an amazing poem right here!!
    and i just loved it:D
    u hv a wonderful way with words
    keep it up
    tk care
    breex