by DeathlyAmore Jul 3, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
rekindled love
With love and passion; Truth. |
Cool...a different style of writing, I like that, keep up the gud work...^^ |
by Hollywood
Great job...once agian... |
Excellent writing, but I didn't feel a lot of flow and rythym. Maybe it's just me. But it had nice depth. |
by Arun Khan
The idea is good, and the writing is fine.. but somewhere you didnt pull it off, try and play with the words abit more, dont be afraid of writing more.. dont get me wrong your a good writer and I liked it, but something is missing.. 3 / 5 |
U have an amazing poem right here!! |