by lexie Jul 3, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
I remember that night, |
by Melpomene
I did enjoy reading this piece although I think you need to change a word such as "coz" too because as the slang really throws readers off when reading. Other then that minor thing I found this piece to be quite hopefully, happy yet sad at the same time mixed together so I really did like the emotions you portrayed here. Well done ~mel |
But it's what you wanted, |