Wow keenan this is even better than the other poem i read just minutes before. I feel like crying, this is soo filled with emotion!!
I loved this part:
"I claim to feel nothing
to be a shadow
or that I am stone
emotionless, unfeeling
but I do cave sometimes
I collapse to pain"
amazing, keenan. Keep writing!

Tis a very good poem keenan, i too have been in the same position as this and sometimes i feel the same way, i give it a perfect 5/5!!! keep these great poems coming!!!

Once again, a great poem. 5/5
i like your writing. deep emotions and feelings and you express them well!
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Amazing poem...one of the best of urs...good job

ashleigh

Very poignant. It's so beautiful and heartrending, indeed; plus, the emotions were emanated by your words rather effectively. Well done! ~Marian

I like this one alot and I know you hate this but damn it I don't care I am in tears:'( This is definetly my most favorite from you..

Beck