Well all i can say is im proud of you for realising you deserve so much better. full of emotion and this actually made me smile the last stanza was what did that. great work
5/5
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I thought it was really awesome, there was so much.........emotion put into it, and the ending is true, its s statement that all women should live by, all we need is ourselves, and not a man to make us feel worth while, they are just an extra in life that are nice to have around when you come by the right one, 5/5

This rather is a fine expression of emotional outrage, raving about the pain of infidelity and heart break. I just thought there's too much telling rather than showing. Nicely done, nonetheless. =]

Great this is a mournful and beautiful poem having the real poetic qualities and lexical power. The flow and the wordings are flawless. I owe you 5/5. tc

Aww! i hate guys that cheat. so sorry you had to go through this. but good job putting your emotions into this poem. excellent job. 5/5.

I can feel your rage in this poem. I'm sorry if this really happened to you..

Anyway flow was smooth, Great vocab. And the ending was superb it sums up all the emotions, well done

5/5!

I once had a girlfriend like that, so I can fit in with this poem. It was great and it flowed well. Good job. 5/5 ^_^.

That was really good, and there was obvious emotion in this... im so sorry that this had to happen to you, and i know a lot of people could relate to this... i will give it a 5/5 and thank you so much for the comment

It was so sad, yet so deep. it was well expressed. there was a lot of emotions in this one to. i bet a lot of people know how this feels. great work, 5/5

I liked the ending it was great way to finish it off
but the only thing that i have a problem with
is that you ended a million of the lines with the word "me

and that can throw the flow off a little bit

4/5

Great portrayl of emotions all throughtout. I'm sure many can relate to this one, as do I. The flow was wonderful. Cheaters suck. :] 5/5

marcella