by malina
Strong yet sad!! i love this kind of feel!! hope to read more!! |
by SADADDY
Oh, young lady the your pain is felt in these words ou have written, just know that one day you will find that special someone. But for now try to keep your head up others will come and go before the right one comes along. May your heart once again feel peace and joy. |
Huh crushed love i know the feeling all to well very nice poem love the first stanza 5/5 |
Hey thanks for my comment, and I really this one, you let people know what it's really like to feel heartbreak, to be crushed by someone you simply love. But love or not over time all things heal. I promise, although things do take time. |
Loved it! Good job! |
Great poem!:)I feel the same right now, and your poem made me cry! |
by Kayla
Very beautiful poem Taz, it was well written and very wonderful. Sad too, I can definitely relate to this piece of work.. so full of emotion. Keep up the great job, I look forward to reading more work from you! 5/5 <3 |
by Megan
I like this poem...good job :) |