I love this poem. its so deep. and truthfull. i like it alot. please check out mine. keep writing you have talent.

I really liked this one and completely understand it =p The floe was great and good choices of words =) 5/5 =D

Thanks for the comment on my poem ^_^ The stories of peoples lifes normally end different then we expect =p

Anyway, great poem =)
Rhea

Wow really good poem