To be honest with you , it's the first that I have seen , but it's cute, shot and sweet, to the point, and aia really like it, thanks for sharing , your friend Tracy d A+

Aw. that was brilliant.
short & sweet, with great imagery.

very nice piece.
keep it up,
bec.x

For a short and restricted form, I thought it was quite lovely and delightful to read as well. :) Its simplicity added beauty to the uncomplicated and fine scenery, and time seemed to stop whirling for the said moment of bliss and contentment.

An enjoyable read, nonetheless. Thanks for sharing it.

Best wishes,
Marian

Wow, your first one is really good =O! It's so short, but really sweet. Keep it up.

I like this, simple short yet effective, keep on writing on what u feel and like

Misstress