Debbie
What a beautiful Haiku. The picture it paints for the minds eye is wonderful.

Love Cindy

What beautiful imagery you have given through well selected words, really impressive write.

Take care
chavii.

Absolutely beautiful penned, well expression! this something i couldn't tell.....well done!
Bert.

How beautiful!! Reminds me of waking up in the Hocking Hills while camping....captured nature perfectly!!

This is great! This form is hard to make memorable because it is so short.
This one has such beautiful imagery and word choice that it paints a picture and is definetly memorable!! EXCELLENT JOB!!

Such beautiful aching imagery. Truly delightful.