You created great imagery in this piece, choice of words is really good and the atmosphere is unique. |
by Lu
If anything scares me it's a tornado. Though we very rarely see one where I live it always makes me feel uneasy when I see a big storm brewing. |
by Kelly
Never had to expierance one so from this poem i count myself very lucky. I like this poem it reminds me that we should never underestimate mother nature. She can create such beautiful things but take them away too if she feel like it. Fab poem. |
by Nix
Wow, very unique. I liked it very much, you can express your emotions very well with your amazing vocab. It deserves 5/5, great job with this one. |