Whoa. ohh, umm. Assalamualaikum w.b.r. ??

All i can say is, WOW... i have not many words to say, but i am in awe from reading this. its hard, i am only twelve years old. ppl think i am crazy to be in this website rather than something else.
This is one of my favorite poems!! its on my list. so are your others.

Written at such an awesome scale; going back in time fashioned as a flashback of a paternal king.

The chronolgy of living in a "golden age" to their devastation, proceeding to give warning to future leaders, was physical and moving.

Well done~

Love this poem. I have given you 5/5 and added you to my list of favouritte authors. Loved the word use of this poem, really great.

...this poem is a very effective, very meaningful, channelling of a deep, knowing voice out of the past...thank you for taking the time to take the dictation....;-)

Wow!...this is BEYOND amazing and so refreshing. I can honestly say that this is one of best poems I've ever read. Nice job 5/5