Comments : My Everything

  • 17 years ago

    by lisa

    Wow this was really good,the rhyming was brilliant and it flowed lovely.i enjoyed the last stanza.keep it up x5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by ABake

    A million other faces
    Two million other eyes
    So many want my heart
    So many wasted tries

    That stanza was amazing.
    That was beautiful.
    I love the emotion put into this.
    You portray your love with every line.
    Great job!
    5/5
    ((Amber))

  • 17 years ago

    by Sweet Fragility

    An everything to anything
    The answer to it all.
    My one and only love
    That made it worth the fall.
    omg my fav stanza and this poem had a nice flow to it..
    keep up the good work!

  • 17 years ago

    by Cuddles

    Charisma, I know exactly how you feel. My fiance is all of the above. Anyway, this is a beautiful poem, and it's titled perfectly.

  • Comment #5

    Another great poem.
    The love was shown.

    'An everything to anything
    The answer to it all.
    My one and only love
    That made it worth the fall.'

    Loved that stanza.
    5/5