I LOVED THIS POEM! This is amazing and just what I needed to read. I hope it gets a thousand comments and votes! Rarely does a poem impress me as much as this, but I think because I can relate it's why I love it so...your ending is inspiring and shows how you can move on. Beautiful!
Charisma*

Wow. that makes perfect sense.

what a wonderful poem.

i really dont know what else to say about it, kinda speechless here.

don't you love what mindless poem writing ends up like. haha

5/5.

The poem makes perfect sense to me and I think you did an amazing job, the word choice and flow were both awesome. Many teenage girls just want boys to like them, but they often try to hard and go to far for what they think they want. Amazing poem 5/5 GG23

Broken down and tainted; unwilling to love again,
Staggering in agony and drowning in lost hope.
Trying so hard to find the path they've lost,
Attempting with all energy left to cope.
^^^That stanza is amazing^^^
I can relate to this poem so much and I love the way you ended it. Somehow this touched me and made me think about things. Great work
5/5
.x

Broken down and tainted; unwilling to love again,
Staggering in agony and drowning in lost hope.
Trying so hard to find the path they've lost,
Attempting with all energy left to cope.

its prob getting old, but i love this stanza! i bet tons of ppl can relate 2 this. i like how it makes ppl think. good job

This is pretty goodMindy...I liked it very much

I thought it was a pretty good poem. At first i was like what is she talking about and i got further into and i begun to see the message, and i thought the ending was purly flawless, 5/5

Good poem, it flows perfectly.
And yes, it does make sense. So many of us has been through that.
Keep up!
5/5 from me

Awesome poem, i'm not much of a love poem type of guy but this one was great.

your servant:
david

Wow.. is this a 5min poem? or something.. that was really good.. You're truelly talented.

And what's even more amusing is that I do that now,
When I used to be one of those.
^^Those lines made the poem extra exciting :)

And though I still sit among lost memories,
I've open myself and done what those girls can't.
To slowly reveal the heart inside of me,
And accept the love of another man.

As I read this last stanza, a tear escaped my eye. This was truly inspirational. Great work.

Yes, it does make sense =]
i loved this poem. your wording is very good.
i especially loved this stanza:

Broken down and tainted; unwilling to love again,
Staggering in agony and drowning in lost hope.
Trying so hard to find the path they've lost,
Attempting with all energy left to cope.

but great job overall! it was an incredibly well written poem.
--Viola

I LOVED THIS POEM! it makes plenty of sense... this ish going in my favs... ^_^ i loved this alot! keep it up!!!! i cant pick out a fav part, the whole this wuz my fav part! =D

and plz check out sum of my poems!

~*~skYe~*~

Awww you poor thing. I know where you're coming from. I had one of my boyfriendspass away a couple months ago. I was so depressed for the longest time, and never thought I could love anyone ever again. And then this guy just showed up and we clicked. Just keep that chin up =) I'll be here if you ever wanna talk.

Anyhow...for the poem. It was great! I loved your emotion throughout it all. And yes, hun it does make sense. Very much so. At first, I thought it was better to go into the sad poems. And then I read to the end and I was all 'Awww' XD So ya, it definately belongs here. The word choice was wonderful. I wouldn't be able to choose better wording for it all. Great job. 5/5 xxoo

Samantha

Another poignant rant of the juvenile behavior of today's teens. You capture your theme with an outspoken detail that makes it compelling in every respect.

Nice pearl you have here.

This poem caught my attention right away.. the flow was ok and the word choice was decent... i think the overall message was really strong.. the begining starts out strong and it ends strong but some lines inbetween didnt seem as thought throuugh... overall an easy read and nice read.. 4/5

It definitley makes sense! A really great poem here. I loved the vocab you used and the flow was flawless. Great portrayal of emotions. 5/5

marcella

I liked it, it definitely made sense. It started off on a negative note, explaining, in detail, why you [and others] found it hard to believe in love, to trust somebody, and to carry on with a relationship. But by the end of the poem, it was hopefully, happy even. I liked that a lot, showing that good things can come from being strong and hopeful, and from wishing.

Good job.

O_o.
I love this one. <3
&& Yes, it makes perfect sense. Lol.
The flow was flawless, the vocab. was strong, && the message behind this one was very original. :P

"And though I still sit among lost memories,
I've open myself and done what those girls can't.
To slowly reveal the heart inside of me,
And accept the love of another man."

^ A perfect ending. Lovely job, hun. :P 5.5 Keep writing.

- Stephyy <3

I loved it, it was amazing, the way you expressed the emotions was beautiful 5/5