This is amazing very good job true feeling was placed in this poem and i can relate |
This was really amazing!!I can relate to it very well!!short indeed but really powerfull!!! |
by Roxiee An
Being concise was good liked it 5/5 |
by Tara Kay
Again, this flowed so well and the style was pne i loved, and you carried it off exceptionally well. |
I thought that it was |
Greatly penned lines, I like this whole piece, from the beginning to the end. |
This a great Triolet that reflects the enduring joy of the togetherness of lovers |
by Nix
Interesting I like your wording. It is short but greatly written. Excellent job, first line is amazing and I like form of poem very much. |
by Brittany C
Beautifuly writen poem. Great word choice and it had a very nice flow to it. I gave it a 5/5. |
by StormyStar
Your emotion was really good in this poem.. i love your words.. lol and your style. in this one again. lol |
by Rachel RTVW
Nice job on this form. Beautiful! |
by Marc Ortiz
You're really good at Tioloet style. Good job, flow was flawless, good choice of words I really enjoyed reading this one. keep writing! |
by lisa
Love the style,love the use of words,loved the poem!!well done!!!5/5 |
by nikki
I loved it, you so good at triolet's, it was beautifully written. your words are amazing. great work 5/5 |
by Amy
This poem is so beautiful, I love reading it! I love the style too! |