I really like your poem its really good you show great emotion in this peom...i think a lot of ppl can relate to it ...keep it up ...and good rhyme! it flows greatly

Isn't it great when you find that special someone to be there for you when your heart has been breaking?

This was a good piece...you used some common rhymes, perhaps you could change up the wording a bit ..by that I mean don't use "cry and eye".."face and pace"...simply because 108893758 thousand other poets do.....Its hard not too because occassionally I use common rhymes too....but try and switch it up! It'll brighten your piece and draw the readers attention more in your poem! This was still very good!
Chelsey

Well written. I feel like we write alike =]]. the only thing i'd suggest is to maybe try and keep the rhyming in the fourth stanza. "Direction" and "done" try RhymeZone.com, I use it all the time =]]. Other than that i loved it!

Aww...really cute poem sweetie it had a really great ending 5/5 <33