If love is the answer, would you rephrase the question?

by Tylor   Jul 3, 2007


Whistle while you work,
Is a dandy thing to do,
But I find myself not working,
Only thinking about you.

Actions speak louder than words,
I use that motto alot,
Because you take my breath away,
And leave my words in knots.

The only thing we have to fear,
Is fear all alone,
Me I fear losing you,
At the thought I just moan.

What doesnt kill you,
Always makes you stronger,
Thats not true, because without you,
I just couldn't live any longer.

If love is the answer,
Would you rephrase the question,
No I'd rather not,
But I'll say it with expression.

Grow old with me,
For the best is yet to be,
Please never let go,
I'll love you for all eternity.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Wow once again original love it, lost love seems your style 5/5 once again lol

  • 17 years ago

    by gavin

    Very nice expression, words are phrased very nicely, Keep Up the Good Work!

  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    The flow was almost perfect, there was one or two spots that weren't "perfect"; however, I liked this poem. If you want you could you dashes between the sayings and the rest of the poem.

    =]

    [if you have time and want to, please check out one of my poems. thanks, and remember, I;m not forcing you too]

  • 17 years ago

    by My tiny voice

    Love dis poem the way it rymes n the thoughful words youve put in to it, keep up the good work.

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