Love dis poem the way it rymes n the thoughful words youve put in to it, keep up the good work.

The flow was almost perfect, there was one or two spots that weren't "perfect"; however, I liked this poem. If you want you could you dashes between the sayings and the rest of the poem.

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[if you have time and want to, please check out one of my poems. thanks, and remember, I;m not forcing you too]

Very nice expression, words are phrased very nicely, Keep Up the Good Work!

Wow once again original love it, lost love seems your style 5/5 once again lol