Beautiful and different. Like we say variety is the spice of life, you poem is such a variety. Keep up the good work.

WOW, that is such a wonderful and beautiful poem in a sense, WOW, i mean ur 12 and this is a non cliche poem, it looks at cutting in a different aspect, and you rhyme in some places and not others, if you are gonna rhyme, have a consistent pattern of it, 5/5

This is a cool poem

Well, i loved it, it was beautifully written, you flow was a little off the structure was great and the poem was nicely penned, great work, 5/5