I'm Still Waiting

by Becca   Jul 3, 2007


I'm ready
You're not
I'm waiting
You're taking
Your time
And mine
I'm hurting
And wanting
To know
What's wrong
What's on your mind
All the time
When you wear a frown
When I'm around
Can't you see
That this is killing me
When you're angry
I can't be happy
What's bothering you
And what can I do
You left me stranded
When you comanded
In silence
Your solitude
I'm here for you
But I'm hurting so bad
And I'm so sad
I have a frown
And I can't smile
I'm not ready
You're not caring
Outside it's raining
Yet I'm still waiting
For to stop taking
Yourself from me
And finally speak

By: Becca (18) (c) 2007

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  • 17 years ago

    by ChAsInG PavEmEnTs

    I've read almost all your poems and so far i love this one the most! it really does show your emotions

    ....i'm still waiting on my major life or death other to show me how he really feels

  • 17 years ago

    by Katie

    I love this one because I've felt this way. Great job, and I liked the style.

  • 17 years ago

    by damont

    I like truthfulness and dependedness of you on the love one. like if he is sad u r effected. yup i also like the flow. what inspired u to write it?

  • 17 years ago

    by paul alexander

    God i know how u feel good job... i want to go to new york one day i will

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