I really thought this poem was very well written. Good flow, great emotion. My favourite stanza was:
If I could replace my mirror
I'd throw it against the wall
Then creep into the corner
'Cause I can't forget at all.

I thought it was really emotional. Awesome work. Keep it up.
Xx Chrissie

Comment #3

Another good poem.
The imagery was great and it flowed well.
Keep it up 5/5