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Greaty written and expressed! Sad nontheless but still a great poem.

Great poem...the first line really captured my attention ....the entire poem is great.. i dont see a need to improve any of it. good job! 5/5

Aww now that I know all this is true it gives it a whole new angle to the poem.
It's very beautiful! :)
You sound like a good kid, so keep up the work. You channel your emotions into the poem very well.

I know what your fealing

I am too young,
To be so broken and hurt,
People say I am golden,
But yet I feel like dirt,

those lines are the best they tell that yong people like us can hurt and feel doun even though were suposed to be happey

Wow. ok..the emotion in this is incredible!
i really love the way it's all put together.
the wording is very simple..but it brings out your feeling excatly.
this stanza for me really hit home (if you know what i mean) :
"I am too young,
To be so broken and hurt,
People say I am golden,
But yet I feel like dirt"

the whole poem was really well done. great work! and keep it up!!
--Viola