This was honestly beautiful!! good work! *hugs*

Girl, that is so beautiful. I can relate almost 100% to this which makes it even better, but even without that it is still such a amazing and meaningful peice. I have read alot of your work and i love it all. Keep it up.
Xx Chrissie

Wow. Iloveit. =) Very emotional & true. The flow was great & overall, you did a lovely job.

"I've tried so hard not to miss you,
Not to cry or scream all over the place.
But it's so tiring keeping all this in,
When you're right in front of my face. "

^ I absolutely adore that stanza. I can relate so much to this poem... it was heartbreaking to read, yet it was a fantastic write. Fantastic job. :] 5.5
- Steph <3

Very nice

Very emotional piece, beautifully penned.
I'm not the big fan of love poetry, but your work is not bad at all.
Great job, 5/5

You still dig him.
=P
Good stuff. Reminds me of highschool and its dramatic relationship struggles haha.

Beautiful ending! Loved that for sure! The whole piece was touching and talks of a struggle so many can relate to in one way or another. Great job!
Charisma*

Thats great!!!! lol i liked the very last part xD but its put together nicely! ill give ya a 5/5!! xD
~*~Skye~*~

Thats great!!!! lol i liked the very last part xD but its put together nicely! ill give ya a 5/5!! xD
~*~Skye~*~

Wow, great poem! Very honest, and written very well :) 5/5

Your rhyming is excellent and the poem goes along in a fine fashion. The love of wanting to let go, of the bind that someone has on you is written very strong, and done well.

Wow agian another one of ur poems taht relate to me!!!! awwwz i love ur work! keep it up!