Aw thats sad.thanxx for the comment and no that didnt happen to me .

Awww thats so sad even to put yourself in a position like that but at the same time is so good
5/5

This was a very interesting poem, quite sad but very good! 5/5
rach xXx

I'm going through a depression phase where I wonder what would happen if I had killed myself and I now know people who pick on you [[in my case I'm picked on]] aren't worth the pain your going to cause your family and if you truly feel sad or something and want to talk [[PS: I'm also 13.]] email me a bornadementedchild@gmail.com

Wow that's a really sad story. i really like it. good job look forward to readin more...

At first i thought you were going in another
direction with this piece but then it became
something cool i like it. Its likebeing at
ur own funureal cool 5/5

Check out a poem called 8:11 by koriey
its on my page under fav authors if you can't find it any other way i think you can relate to her stuff kinda dark poems

Wow thats hecks deep that is one of my all time favorite poem

Whoa, freaky, got a shiver there. This is a good poem, the end was unexpected. I like it, how can you say you're not any good?

*stutters* w-wow! I shivered too. And seriously-- you are GOOD. I really like your work. Hope to read more soon. 5/5

Love it. very clever. good job.

Amazing.

Wow, very sad but also very good

This one is one of ur best, i really like it!!!

Awwww this is a good poemm

You stole that out of a chicken soup book and changed the words around some.... these are suposed to be your own poems.