This was truely amazing and wonderful to read!!Each stanza wa very well written!!
Wow!!
All the best
And take care.

Your last two lines were my favorite! Such a pretty piece of poetry!
I have one suggestion on these lines:

"Your touch causes shivers to run up and down my spine,
My body is here but my mind is on cloud nine."

I would put it like this instead:

Your touch causes shivers to run up my spine
My body is here but my mind's on cloud nine

I think it flows a little better with less words...but hey, just a suggestion.
I voted, too, cuz I know you like that! LOL
Charisma*

The flow was awesome, thats the first thing that stood out to me, and also the beauty and love was so pure and every line held emotion.
You are very talented, well done
xxxxx

Wow this is an amazing poem everything everyword jsut works together

I really like this one alot
it flowed perfect
and it was cliche
not like others
have described love

"Your touch causes shivers to run up my spine,
My body is here but my mind's on cloud nine."

favorite lines because like i said before, a difffernt way to describe love, i thought it was great, good work, 5/5

To feel this emotion has to be experianced to be written down in the way you wrote it and to experience this is just amazing great job i loved it very much!!

laura

I like your poem al lot.. keep it up

I really enjoyed the poem the rhyming was great and the flow aswell, the words were so strong and heartfelt. It's amazing how important love can be in our lives, and just how much it can change them. Fantastic poem 5/5 GG23

The meter on this poem is perfect and it was very easy for me as the reader to pick up the rhythm. The sentement and content is beautiful, and seemed to flow straight from your heart.

Interesting rhyming. First stanza is poor (that is just my opinion) but others are great.
5/5

I loved it. I can relate to it very well. I really liked the word choice. I gave it a 5/5.

You are a very talented poet and i love your style.. i love how you write.. you say what you feel and i love that!! lol. keep it up!!

Very lovely.
you know what is the meaning of true love. i loved your poem. and ryming sceme was aslo good. you have talent.
i am sure you can write more good works for poetry

nicely panned aswell
i am giving you 5/5

take care

Aww I love the ending :D The poem was simple but beautiful.. Just like real love.. I like the emotions in the poem! GOOD job! keep writing my friend. You are truelly talented.

I love this! its amazing... it belongs in a valentines day card or something... <3 5/5

The feelings and emotions you put to this poem were so pure and cute...
My fave lines should be;

For us to last forever I will put up a fight
If these feelings are wrong I don't want to be right

Good job,
Laura

This poem is beautiful..the flow is great and it seems like a fairytale=]

This poem was great.
full of emotion.
made me think of my boyfriend.
5/5

Wow...this is amazing...every line was just beautiful..i loved it..

the third stanza was my favorite..those lines just really got to me...

the flow is great and the rhyming is perfect. 5/5