by BlueDreams Jul 4, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
I open my eyes, a vision materialists before me |
by Marc Ortiz
You're really good at writing love poems, keep it up. I like your choice of words, the opening stanza is good - it really attracts the reader's attention. Flow was smooth |
by Ruby
Oh wow... that was absolutely beautiful. Your talent is amazing and your emotions prominent. Keep up the great work! |
by Cindy
Bert |
Beautiful.....just so beautiful...your imagination and selection of words just so simply take me somewhere i always wanted to be...for reading your poems....one has to be well prepared in advance...with all helmets and seat belts... :o) |
Bert. |