Absolutely beautiful verse you writing here my friend, yet the title "vision of loveliness" awesome! well expression emotions........well done!

Beautifully written poem, with truly superb imagery. The wording through the whole piece is great, and I didn't find any mistake in this flawless poem.
Well done, 5/5 truly deserved

Like hearing the voice of an angel when she does talk
Elegance the way she dresses, sheer grace when she happens to walk
In life it doesn't matter how hard the struggle, how long the fight
Just to be near this vision, you see the world in a new light.
^^^
What a beautiful stanza Bert, as is the entire poem dear heart !

Such a suiting title .... well done
Luanne

Beautiful feelings and emotions could be evoked from even the coldest of hearts from this beautiful inspiration of pure love and dedication for a goddess unknown to those who read this. Yet, she comes alive in the magic of your words. Incredible job...

Beautifully written, absolutely breathtaking...loved it...hope you are doing o.k. loved this beautiful write...

Hugs, Ann

Bert.

Such an absolutely beautiful write, dear friend. So many wonderful lines, I couldn't possibly pick favorites.

Very heartfelt and emotional. Flowed like water from a river of dreams... or fantasy.

Excellent job.

Always,
Jeannie

Beautiful.....just so beautiful...your imagination and selection of words just so simply take me somewhere i always wanted to be...for reading your poems....one has to be well prepared in advance...with all helmets and seat belts... :o)
on a serious note.....you are simply gift to this site...keep writing friend

all the best and take care

Bert
What a beautiful piece you have penned....Your words are breath taking. Like a song of love being sung. Imagery is wonderful :)
Excellent job!
Take Care Cindy

Oh wow... that was absolutely beautiful. Your talent is amazing and your emotions prominent. Keep up the great work!

You're really good at writing love poems, keep it up. I like your choice of words, the opening stanza is good - it really attracts the reader's attention. Flow was smooth

5/5! as always