This is a very sad , deep and meaningful poem full of emotion and I can relate to it 5/5

Very well worded, the flow was flawless, and the imagery was good. This was very sad and full of emotion.
keep writing
take care
love Tara-Kay
x

Sad yet very good...i could feel your emotions as you expressed them throughout the poem...nice job. 5/5 =]

Another great poem by you, you are really talented... keep it up dear

Well I thought the flow was a bit off but the way emotions expressed were great. Very well indeed. But still I'm expecting more than..

I meant to say.. more than this.. sorry..

Ur talented this was very emotional and seemed to really flow great work

5/5