Comments : Forgotton One

  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    "I'm nothing more but a Soul
    Wandering the earth forever
    Waiting to hear the Call
    But the song will come never.
    To my ears."
    ^ My favorite stanza, excellently written.
    I like the repetition of the first stanza in the end, it leaves great impression.
    The choice of words was good through the whole poem, and the flow, too.

  • 17 years ago

    by adroit

    Interesting concept. I like this poem. It makes me wonder.