I Loved You More

by Shannon   Jul 4, 2007


I loved you more
Then anyone
Just seeing you,
Made me feel numb
Your looks were sweet,
Your kisses sincere,
How could you let it
Disappear?

My love lives on
Heart beating your name
With all the small pieces
Loves naked flame

I love you so,
Why can't you see?
That you're the guy
Who's right for me.

You say you see
What you did to me
But do you really?
Cause we were meant to be...

I can't go on
Without you near
Goodbye, my love,
I'm leaving you here

Tears fall from my eyes
I knew it would happen -
No surprise
I take the knife
with no regret
lift it slowly
and slice my neck

Then drop the knife,
Blood trickling to the floor.
It was true, you know,
I loved you more...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany

    I like this poem
    it is a thriller and very beautiful

    brittany :]

  • 17 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    NicE poeM.
    VerY truE.
    EnjoyeD readinG iT.
    TakE carE...

    LUZAn

  • 17 years ago

    by beautifulybroken

    This is such a powering poem....it gave me goosebumps...this i can relate to because i was once in your situation

  • 17 years ago

    by Taz

    Wow i thought it was really amazing and was deep i loved it

  • 17 years ago

    by Boy

    Aaaaah,,, realy touching poem. i loved the way you have expressedyour feelings. you pain talks in this poem

    one thing
    i love one stanza alot in this poem and this is this..

    You say you see

    What you did to me

    But you don't,

    And it was meant to be...

    that realy relates to me.

    i will give you 5/5
    taek care

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