Huh i know what you mean truly the poems transition was a little iffy 4/5 maybe u can read one of mine.

Aaaaah,,, realy touching poem. i loved the way you have expressedyour feelings. you pain talks in this poem

one thing
i love one stanza alot in this poem and this is this..

You say you see

What you did to me

But you don't,

And it was meant to be...

that realy relates to me.

i will give you 5/5
taek care

Wow i thought it was really amazing and was deep i loved it

This is such a powering poem....it gave me goosebumps...this i can relate to because i was once in your situation

NicE poeM.
VerY truE.
EnjoyeD readinG iT.
TakE carE...

LUZAn

I like this poem
it is a thriller and very beautiful

brittany :]