Comments : The Locked Soul's Freedom

  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Great poem, I like the choice of words and the flow.
    I can relate to it.
    My favorite stanza is;
    "They say that beauty comes from within,
    You know nothing of what's under my skin.
    Perhaps there is a reason I hide,
    What I feel, and what's inside."
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Rose not your average

    Vulnerability is not my strongest part,
    I might get hurt, if I open my heart.
    For me, it's hard to open my shell,
    To open what inside, is like pure hell.

    this stanza was my favorite it showed so much emotion, this whole poem did! well done 5/5