Man, i.. think this poem is one of the best ive ever read.. i really like it.. awesome.. real awesome.. keep up the good work. 5/5
-Tylor

Wow Andrew this is a very nice poem thanks for the advice i will work at it and thanks for the comment love your poem.

Tabithia

Lol its fantastic i really liked it

You have a very unique style of writing!
Great Job!
5/5
_Amber_

Hey mate , Very unique perspective , I loved it , 5/5

Dude that was like.... GREAT!!!!

I really enjoyed reading this poem :) it just goes to show that cupids arrow is a double edged sword just like love is :( i gave this poem 5/5 :) its great :)

I like this one.
Just one thing, isn't cupid supose to be a nice guy?
Lol.

I love where your coming from in this poem. you have a realli unique way of writing. keep up the great work
shell x

I like the way you twisted cupid to be the evil one, its original and it works really well...great poem

Amy x