Beautifully written love poem, with extraordinary wording.
Whole piece is very intense and descriptions are truly captivating.
Well done, 5/5

Thank you for the comment, i'm new to this....

your work is amazing, all of it.

I'll never look at a rose the same way ever again...heh

Ahh yes, the use of thing such as roses as a symbol of emotion or what the writer feels about it. Reminds me of our group activity about sijo. Love it.

WOW this was very good, I loved it flow was good and wording was great , you did a wonderful job on a well written poem, great job, loved the way you captured the pure beauty in this write, very nice ,,,, keep it up ,, your friend Tracy d 5/5