That was awesome , you did a wonderful job on it , wording was very good lot's of deep emotional feelings ,write write , as always , my favorite lines:

Vowed this piece of paper to you and loveless nights,
Now leaving you with bruises from our fights
All you have to understand is to make it your way;
Trying to keep our passion alive is like reviving the lifeless.
wonderful job, keep it up , your friend Tracy d 5/5

I love it! Second stanza is my favorite, but the whole poem is really excellently written.
I like the flow very much, and the usage of words is great.
Well done, flawless piece. 5/5

Very well written and of course not of your wort. Your poems are always adorable, and like other pieces this is also sparkling. tc

Your close reader
Fsams

Not your worst
but not your very best

it was a pretty good poem

and i loved how the last line in every stanza

rhymed

it was good

a well deserved

5/5

Emotional and very good word choice. I don't think it was your worst. Wonderful piece.

Vowed this piece of paper to you and loveless nights,
Now leaving you with bruises from our fights
All you have to understand is to make it your way;
Trying to keep our passion alive is like reviving the lifeless.

Fave stanza ^^^^^^^^^^^

I adored, once again, your handling of descriptive language. It's one of the fundamental tools of a poet to master; and you used it well. I further adored the thought of a fruitless love depicted with a desperate character. It's spectacularly vivid and enjoyable to read on the whole.

On the other hand, the overall flow needs a bit of a reworking, I believed. Just a bit. Other than that, kudos. x]

This is better than the last one I read. The title is very catchy and so is the poem. It's about lost love yet it has a bit of humor. Great ending!

Oh don't say that this piece is your worst coz it was magnificent! The imagination in the poem and the emotions enveloped there are really good! And what amaze me is how you put the character on the story, on how it expressed itself (the sadness and full of longing and hopes) Keep it up!!

Once again you say one of your worst but the quality is very good, the word choice and imagery were amazing. I love the title and the first stanza it really captures the reader. Great job 5/5 GG23

I love this poem and the writing style you used you say likely your worst well then your worst is better than my best i particularly love this stanza

Vowed this piece of paper to you and loveless nights,
Now leaving you with bruises from our fights
All you have to understand is to make it your way;
Trying to keep our passion alive is like reviving the lifeless

i also like that it doesn't rhyme to much
alot of rhyming in poems makes its sound forced but the way you rhymed the first two lines in every stanza made it seem easily written

i give it 5/5 for true beauty

Again, wonderful imagery. You write such descriptive pieces. Although, the flow here, I feel was a bit choppy. Nonetheless 5/5

marcella

Some of the words I could not understand why you pieced them together but it made the poem very interesting. Well done.

PEACE and BLESSINGS
~Shade127

I loved the uniquness and description of this poem 5/5