"Look [at] me in the eyes."

Nicely done. =]

Gauging its degree, methought this poem was rather engaging and endearing to read.

"Just hold me.
Hold me all night long.
Don't let me go.
We will create our own love song."
`The fact that certain lovers could fashion their own love song by way of their thoughts and mutual sentiments for the other is enthralling.

Lovely work, m'dear. Keep on writing what you feel and like. I hope you all the best and take care!

Marian

Very sweet poem indeed!
Take me on walks,
And open the car door.
Tease me,
Leave me wanting more.

That's the only stanza where the flow was off...the third line should be longer...but other than that, it was a very pretty piece!
Charisma*