Woah..That was very very well written. You have so much talent. I really loved what you were writing about. My favourite stanza was:

maybe one day I will learn to depart,
stitch my wounds and finally start to heal,
stop writing sonnets to my broken heart,
maybe one day happiness I will feel.

It was very beautiful. Never stop writing.
Xx Chrissie

Bryan
This is a great series you have going here. Imagery is great. Keep up the good work.

Excellent :)
Take Care Cindy

I absolutely love this poem!
Its so great and oh so sad..
Lovely ending
Damn, im jealous of your writing haha xP
I adore this stanza :

"Time sweeps by, as I sing my lonely tune,
under these black stars, in this purple sky,
While I sit looking at this crimson moon,
I just can't help but think and wonder why."

Very well done my friend, your writing keeps getting better and better..specially when im reading your poem after decades .. lol .. Lovely work =D

Keep Smiling xxx

This was truly lovely and endearing; plus, the way you've subtly written it, by way of a poetic form, emanated your emotions rather admirably. Nicely done, as always! 5/5 ~Marian