Fallin on broken wings

As i sit here wondering how this world has just passed me by

wishing that i was meant for more then just my failed attempts to fly

hoping that you would be by my side

now more then ever as i lay here just wanting to hide

hoping that i would just die

i cant believe i trusted in all your stupid little lies

i don't see how u cant see that all i do now is cry

you don't see how i could do this to myself and you all wonder why

I'm hoping that next time you will see me flying high

hopefully i will be away from this pain

is this a test on which i should gain

on these broken wings all i do is hope to be flying high

can u see how i feel all the pain and hate i have inside

do you see how i am with not having a guide

with all this i just want to hide

with my last word i cried my last tear

and now I'm filled with all this fear

hoping that maybe my end is near

starring at the ground

watching the blood fall all around

i look up too see you standing there with this look in your eye its fear

as i rub my wrist all it does it just smear

as i lay here all you do is stare hoping that its not what it appears

as a young girl lay there despair

all because this world was SO unfair

this is the first poem i have ever wrote so please comment on me what to make changes too