Hey marie your poem is really awesome
i don know about anyone
i njoyed and love dit and
ya plz being a friend(future friend)do aslo comment on mine and ya be true and honest
just a thing that i felt a bit short was that the length of sentences were constanly chenaging and you put too much importance to match the rhyme(i am not a prof don mind it plz)

Wonderfully written poem, good flow and wording was excellent,in my words it was a beautiful poem and friends are great to have , you have a wonderful talent, hope to see you up and running soon great job , your friend Tracy d.........5/5