Not Yet Broken- Not Quite Whole

by Whisper   Jul 4, 2007


Feeling everything fix itself
And still I'm not ok
My heart is no longer broken
But I don't know what to say

I've made so many mistakes
And he makes them all disappear
Him saying he loves me
Is the only thing I ever hear

He says that I am perfect
He says forget the past
He says that I'm his future
But how long will we last?

I don't ever want to lose him
But even with him I'm not alright
I will love him forever
How can I make this right?

I have so many "what-if's"
And I'm scared that I'll lose him
What if he gets hurt because of me?
He says the chances of that are slim

He has become my everything
And still I'm not ok
My heart is no longer broken
But I don't know what to say

**My heart once spoke of being in love, then came this poem full of worry and doubt, and now I am trying to get over him. This was written before me and him were over...**

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  • 17 years ago

    by Chrissie

    Awww im sorry to hear you guys are over. I liked this poem alot. Especcially the opening. Nice flow as well. Keep it up!
    Xx Chrissie

  • 17 years ago

    by BrokenREALiTy

    And I'm scared that I'll lose him
    What if I he gets hurt because of me?
    `I think it sounds kind of off when you repeat "lose him" but it still works . And I don't think the "I" is supposed to be there in that second line o-o

    But I absolutely loved this . The vocabulary used is simple, and I bet many can relate to this . WHich is probably why I love it even more [: You write about being in love, and yet in doubt in a different way; yet saying the same thing . I think you did a nice job with this . It clearly states what you're trying to say without being direct .
    And I love the choice of title (:

    ..__MiNDYY

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